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Wave The God of Azure Flame
Posts : 1790 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 34 Location : Edge of Infinity
| Subject: War Police Wed Jan 26, 2011 10:38 pm | |
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TriRevan Child of Morganna
Posts : 1255 Join date : 2010-04-14 Age : 31 Location : Between the reaches of sky and earth.
| Subject: Re: War Police Thu Jan 27, 2011 7:06 pm | |
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kingalex120 Key of Twilight
Posts : 1085 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 33 Location : A Place...With Very Few Windows
| Subject: Re: War Police Fri Jan 28, 2011 12:57 pm | |
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Wave The God of Azure Flame
Posts : 1790 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 34 Location : Edge of Infinity
| Subject: Re: War Police Fri Jan 28, 2011 1:43 pm | |
| This, my friends, is another concept for a story currently in the works! The main concept deals with the idea of a "war police" whose job is to prevent war crimes. So far I've decided to make the War Police supernatural in origin and will either pick the side who is just or fight both sides and end the war themselves. | |
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TriRevan Child of Morganna
Posts : 1255 Join date : 2010-04-14 Age : 31 Location : Between the reaches of sky and earth.
| Subject: Re: War Police Sun Jan 30, 2011 7:36 pm | |
| Sounds a bit like Illuminati.
Cool concept. | |
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Wave The God of Azure Flame
Posts : 1790 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 34 Location : Edge of Infinity
| Subject: Re: War Police Mon Jan 31, 2011 1:54 pm | |
| The War Police aren't part of some secret society, if anything they destroy something like that. | |
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TriRevan Child of Morganna
Posts : 1255 Join date : 2010-04-14 Age : 31 Location : Between the reaches of sky and earth.
| Subject: Re: War Police Mon Jan 31, 2011 8:27 pm | |
| Yeah, well, on the whole world-regulation thing that's still similar. | |
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HaseoXthofTwilight Knight of The World
Posts : 813 Join date : 2010-04-16 Age : 37 Location : The Point Where night And Day Meet
| Subject: Re: War Police Sat Feb 05, 2011 5:07 pm | |
| I have to agree with Tri. The similarity is there but the supernatural aspect is intriguing. Got anymore info on it yet Wave? | |
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proceedtoheaven The Terror of Death
Posts : 2080 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 35 Location : Cash Town 8D
| Subject: Re: War Police Sat Feb 05, 2011 6:45 pm | |
| ILUMINATIIIII!!!!!! O____O *puts on tweed jacket* | |
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Wave The God of Azure Flame
Posts : 1790 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 34 Location : Edge of Infinity
| Subject: Re: War Police Sun Feb 06, 2011 10:27 am | |
| - HaseoXthofTwilight wrote:
- I have to agree with Tri. The similarity is there but the supernatural aspect is intriguing. Got anymore info on it yet Wave?
Well, I finally finished the backstory, and this is what I came up with. The story starts off in the aftermath of WWII where the Ally forces are releasing the victims of the Holocaust camps. During the evacution of Auschwitz, a rogue Nazi military group attack the camp and begin killing both the Ally forces and the former prisoners of the camp. The allies fight back but between protecting the prisoners and themselves the force finds itself spread out to thin. The Nazis "herd" the camper prisoners back into the cabins and light them on fire using flamethrowers. Nearly everyone is killed until something strange happens; the Nazis begin screaming in pain, covering their ears from a sound that seems only they can hear. Blood starts leaking out of their noses, eyes, and mouths; when their heads start turning red they explode in chucks of meat and blood. The allies and camp prisoners look in both shock and horror, many thought that maybe they were saved in divine intervention. It wasn't until an unknown being appears in the small lake of blood they finally see their savior. A strange women surrounded in a divine golden light looks towards the buring cabins and uses the light surrounding her to put out the flames. The woman appeared to be over five feet tall, with long golden hair cascading down to the lower reaches of her back. Her eyes are as white as the gown she wore, her arms and hands decorated with many exotic jewelery nobody has seen before. The woman disappears as soon as the flames were put out, leaving many in a state of awe. Another sighting had been reported in the city of Nagoya, where US troops were raping nearly every woman in sight. Before any more of them were harmed as many as ten of the divine woman from Auschwitz appear and kill the troops attempting to rape the women. The American soliders tried to fight back but the beings proved to be too much and before long nearly every American solider is wiped out. Soon more sightings start coming in from around the world. Women and men who fit the description of the last two sightings are seen around the world in various locations where many inhuman war crimes were commited, wiping out anyone who has committed the horrible acts. For a while, the beings weren't sighted until during the Korean War. Like before, the men and women wiped out any criminals of the war and any armed forces that dared to stand against them. The North Korean army was wiped out overnight, and South Korea moved in and unified into a single Korean Republic. Many newspapers picked up the pattern of the beings appearence when war crimes were committed, and in one article the name "War Police" was used to describe them and the name stuck. The War Police make numerous appearences over the years during conflicts in Vietnam, Tibet, Israel, Cuba, Morocco, Goa, and many others. They rarely ever picked a side during the conflicts and if they did it was the side who has commited the most war crimes. On even more rare cases the War Police would defeat both sides of the war, forcing both sides to call a ceasefire ths ending the war. We now arrive in the present day; where the topic of the "War Police" is still a hot topic and a pop culture icon. The War on Terror lasts only a few days, because the Taliban and Al Quida have been destroyed by the War Police. China, while still a communist nation, has adopted more "peaceful" means to end internal conflicts due to the War Police's intervention during the Tiananmen Square protests. Many revolutions turn into "peaceful protests" due to the fear that if the opposing side took violent actions the War Police would protect the protesters. The story is viewed through the eyes of an American marine named Oliver Creed. He was stationed in Los Angeles, on his way to Okinawa, when suddenly the War Police start attacking the Western coast of the United States. Panic spreads throughout the country and Oliver is one of the many troops tasked with stopping the War Police before the reach D.C.. Oliver and his platoon are easily defeated, but for some reason Oliver is spared by one War Police woman. Confused, Oliver decides to tail the War Police and during his journey he sides with many different marines and even citizens to prevent the War Police from advancing. But over time he soon discovers the real reason why the War Police are attacking the nation and does his best to uncover a conspiracy to the entire world. | |
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kingalex120 Key of Twilight
Posts : 1085 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 33 Location : A Place...With Very Few Windows
| Subject: Re: War Police Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:08 pm | |
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Wave The God of Azure Flame
Posts : 1790 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 34 Location : Edge of Infinity
| Subject: Re: War Police Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:59 pm | |
| Yep, I scare myself sometimes. >_> | |
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TriRevan Child of Morganna
Posts : 1255 Join date : 2010-04-14 Age : 31 Location : Between the reaches of sky and earth.
| Subject: Re: War Police Sun Feb 06, 2011 9:32 pm | |
| Hm, sometimes that's a good thing? | |
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Wave The God of Azure Flame
Posts : 1790 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 34 Location : Edge of Infinity
| Subject: Re: War Police Mon Feb 07, 2011 12:59 pm | |
| I never did say it was a bad thing. It just scares me how fast a story comes to me. | |
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TriRevan Child of Morganna
Posts : 1255 Join date : 2010-04-14 Age : 31 Location : Between the reaches of sky and earth.
| Subject: Re: War Police Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:03 pm | |
| Well, then I say it can be a bad thing sometimes. | |
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Wave The God of Azure Flame
Posts : 1790 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 34 Location : Edge of Infinity
| Subject: Re: War Police Mon Feb 07, 2011 5:53 pm | |
| Anyway, any questions regarding to War Police? | |
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proceedtoheaven The Terror of Death
Posts : 2080 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 35 Location : Cash Town 8D
| Subject: Re: War Police Mon Feb 07, 2011 6:38 pm | |
| none but a demand for this in a book or comic or somethign more i can read cuz im HOOKED MAN!!! | |
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Wave The God of Azure Flame
Posts : 1790 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 34 Location : Edge of Infinity
| Subject: Re: War Police Tue Feb 08, 2011 7:05 am | |
| I'll make this into a book, just like Oceanid and Chrome Crusade. | |
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proceedtoheaven The Terror of Death
Posts : 2080 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 35 Location : Cash Town 8D
| Subject: Re: War Police Tue Feb 08, 2011 9:00 pm | |
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Wave The God of Azure Flame
Posts : 1790 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 34 Location : Edge of Infinity
| Subject: Re: War Police Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:35 pm | |
| Okay, so let's make a list here...
The Zodiac War Purebred Born by Destiny Astral Asylum Ex Nihilo Empty Birth Heralds of the Muse Sinful Rose Undying Wish The God of Atlantis Code Geass: Sins of our Fathers X/2012 .hack//ReBORN Neon Genesis Evangelion: New Testiment The Oceanid Chrome Crusade War Police Neo Neo: The Philosopher King Neo: Firstborn Neo: The Dark Era Neo: The Martyer Queen
I've got SOOOOOOOO much work to do. | |
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tsukasayuki Queen Of the Palace
Posts : 1547 Join date : 2010-04-14 Age : 34 Location : Here and there
| Subject: Re: War Police Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:58 pm | |
| Shiiiit I thought I had a lot of work to do....
=x.x=
Anyway, this sounds amazing Wave. I can't wait for all of your stuff, especially Neo. SO MUCH!
*shakes Wave Violently* How do you have the time for all of this!?!?!?
I got a lot of story ideas, but I don't have the time to plot them out like you do. It's really amazing : D | |
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tsukasayuki Queen Of the Palace
Posts : 1547 Join date : 2010-04-14 Age : 34 Location : Here and there
| Subject: Re: War Police Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:59 pm | |
| What's "Neo: The Martyr Queen?" | |
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proceedtoheaven The Terror of Death
Posts : 2080 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 35 Location : Cash Town 8D
| Subject: Re: War Police Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:08 am | |
| sure you wanna ask that? XD | |
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tsukasayuki Queen Of the Palace
Posts : 1547 Join date : 2010-04-14 Age : 34 Location : Here and there
| Subject: Re: War Police Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:19 am | |
| Why?
What's it got to do with?
Me? What's he making me do this time? =-.-= | |
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Wave The God of Azure Flame
Posts : 1790 Join date : 2010-04-13 Age : 34 Location : Edge of Infinity
| Subject: Re: War Police Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:39 am | |
| - tsukasayuki wrote:
- *shakes Wave Violently*
How do you have the time for all of this!?!?!? *Points to own head* This thing never stops!! Not even in my sleep!! | |
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